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    Inactive Member Shindy's Avatar
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    Brawl, Finale

    The two women's big breasts heaved as they gulped in air. They staggered, literally, towards one another. They came close enough to exchange blows and then Andi snapped an unbelievably powerful kick into Lisa' crotch. My ferocious competitor's eyes went wide and she swung a punch instinctively, which missed feebly. Andi counterpunched perfectly, with a massive roundhouse that, combined with the kick to the groin, dropped Lisa to her knees. Andi grabbed Lisa's hair and began kicking and punching her wildly. All Lisa could do was try to cover her face and tits as her head snapped around violently. She collapsed to the ground as Andi turned to stomping her. My once powerful girl reduced to a quivering mess. She struggled to escape the beating as Andi took out her anger, scratching and kicking as Lisa tried to drag herself away and Shelly and I pulled the big bitch off my defeated girlfriend.

    The look of pain, anguish, and frustration was evident on Lisa's defeated face. What was also evident was the relief that it was all over. It was never the same between them--Andi always was the dominant woman--the dynamic of their relationship was very interesting. It truly was like that of two lionesses in the wild.

    The End

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    Re: Brawl, Finale

    Good Story!!

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    Re: Brawl, Finale

    It's always good to have more Shindy on the board.

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    Re: Brawl, Finale

    The method of writing in small manageable chunks is a good one for aspiring perspiring writers to look at. It isn't as daunting as making a whole big story.

    Shindy - THANKS!

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    Re: Brawl, Finale

    As always Shindy...great story!

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